Friday, June 20, 2014

Day 752

Did it:

Kyle
Elena

Monday, June 16, 2014

Day 751

Did it:

Elena

Friday, June 13, 2014

Day 750

Did it:  Elena

Thursday, June 12, 2014

Day 749

Did it:

Jamie - I always think summer should be this productive period because I won't have to do school stuff. Hah!

Elena - Yeah, everyone home and everyone wanting something, right? I guess that's an argument for "you better do whatever you're going to do right now, because it's not going to get better later." Except that sometimes it does. Just not when you're expecting it. 

Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Day 748

Did it:

Kyle--I have been barely keeping my head above water with the craziness of the past month, but I am getting back on the writing wagon. I've been missing it!

Elena

Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Day 747

Did it: Elena - not being very motivated or productive here. Bleh.

Monday, June 9, 2014

Day 746

Did it:

Jamie

Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Day 745

Did it:

Jamie - what are you doing to analyze, Elena?  Outlining?  Diagramming?

Elena - Oh, so tedious, but really helpful, too, actually. I think it's worth it. And I think ultimately it will save me revision time. I'm following Cheryl Klein's suggestion of going through scene by scene and numbering each (so they can be moved around, if needed) and listing things like the starting page, where and when it's set, point of view (just because mine jumps between two), the major players in the scene, what each wants at the beginning, a paragraph summary of the action and a one-sentence summary; emotional plot points; what change takes place in the scene; and any revision notes to myself as I run through this stuff.

I'm doing mine as a word document with bullet points for each. A spread sheet might be more helpful to some, but my brain freaks if things look too mathematical. Just the process of analyzing this way is probably the more important part.

If you want more ideas about how to analyze scenes, I liked Anita Nolan's suggestions, here. Cheryl suggested this article.

Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Day 744

Sat down to do it and had a baby wake up:

Jamie - Sterling's changed his nap schedule, the stinker.  Will summer help, or make it worse?

Did it:

Jamie - Yay!  He went back to sleep.
Elena - hope you got something done :)

Monday, June 2, 2014

Day 743

Did it:

Elena- tediously going through and analyzing each scene in my 430 page novel. But this should make the next revision easier, I hope.